-EDIT- ok, so I made a few revisions. hopefully it flows better. and yes, I know there's still some "she said, he said" stuff going on here, but I was having a time getting it to work better -END EDIT-
um, ok, so after reading something that *Felis-Draconis wrote last night, I felt like writing something too I've been wanting to write this for a long time now, but never got around to it. yeah. ZKDHJNZSIHRJZMJTRS I STAYED UP UNTIL 8:30AM THIS MORNING WRITING THIS. 8:30AM...8 FREAKIN' 30.
Sorry I never got around to giving you some editing suggestions, but it turns out you didn't need them at all! This flows a lot better, and makes a lot more sense with the beginning explanation. Me likes!
haha it's ok C: you're busy and I understand that. I'm glad to hear that it flows better! and I've heard that the explanation helped quite a few people guess I should've done that in the first place XDDDD thank you!!!